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Everything You've Got
Part 25
by $imone


            Already two limos pulled up: one for the 
band, and one for the girls plus Bruce and Eric, who 
were cordially invited to the show.  They went off to 
sound check and we got escorted to our hotel. We 
caught some naps before show time, but I heard a knock 
at my door eventually.  The girls all wanted to get 
ready together, especially Lorelei & Liz, so they 
could surprise Bruce and Eric with their new looks.  
Apparently, Natalie already took to grooming because 
she had already squeezed into her dress and was 
looking fabulous.

            I zipped up my corset and pulled on the 
mesh skirt, tied down the garters to my thong, and 
slipped on the gloves.  I put my hair up in a bun 
using Chinese sticks.  Shandi opted for a short, 
glittery, backless dress.  Kitty wore a leather top 
with a matching skirt, fringe hanging all around. And 
Liz and Lorelei wore matching snakeskin silky tops 
with holes cut out for their breasts, with matching 
pants.

            “Looks like we’re hell bent for leather,” 
Kitty laughed.  Lorelei called her room and told Bruce 
and Eric to come see us.  Sooner rather than later, a 
knock came to our door. 

            “Who is it?” I yelled.

            “Room service,” Eric yelled back in a 
falsetto.

            “Should we let ‘em in?” Liz teased.

            “Please!” Bruce begged.  The room erupted 
with laughter and Kitty opened the door, the guys 
practically falling into the group.  Bruce brushed 
himself off and said casually, “We weren’t doing 
anything… uh, wrong.”

            “Right,” Lorelei pulled him close and 
placed his hands over where the mesh covered her 
breasts, then slowly moved them down to show her bare 
buttocks beneath the mesh.  She turned around, flipped 
her hair back, and bent over slightly.  Bruce fell to 
his knees and began to kiss her feet.

            “I am not worthy! I am not worthy!” he 
repeated.  

            “There is a God, and he is good,” Eric 
gasped, looking Liz up and down. “Oh yeah, we forgot. 
The limo’s here,” he said, handing us our backstage 
passes.

            Arriving at the show, we managed to draw 
almost as much attention as KISS did.  We sat front 
row with Doc, Bruce, and Eric, plus plenty of 
security.  There would be no more Shannon Tweed 
incidents.  The kids were backstage.  Gene told me he 
felt that they didn’t need to see us all dressed up, 
and they could watch the show from backstage.

            Suddenly, the lights went low and everyone 
began cheering.  The big voice man got on the PA 
system and re-introduced the guys to Detroit Rock 
City.  They started the show with “Shout It Out Loud” 
and everyone was singing with all they could.  They 
show seemed to last forever until they got up to 
singing “God of Thunder”.  Gene moved down the stairs 
and towards me with the blood gushing from his lips.  
I held out my arms and waving his tongue around, he 
splashed my gloves with blood.  I began rubbing it on 
myself as he was lifted out over us, growling out the 
words to my favorite KISS song.

            Soon after that, the show went by 
quickly.  Paul’s words boomed over the anthem, “It’s 
nice to know we can come back to Detroit Rock City! We 
love you people!” The crowd cheered. “But now we have 
to see who our real fans are, and whose here just for 
the show.  Alright! Who saw us on our last tour? Who 
saw the Revenge tour?” The crowd again cheered. “OK, 
before we end this show, we’re gonna test ya! This is 
a song that we only did on our last tour… but wait, we 
need some help. Excuse me, Mr. Security Man, would you 
let up our V.I.P. guests and can we get a few chairs 
up here for Bruce & Eric?”  We got escorted upstage to 
the guys and looking out over the crowd, I thought I 
was going to pass out. I quickly ran to Gene, who 
welcomed me with a warm embrace. “These are the ladies 
of Strutter, and you know what they’re gonna do? Do 
you know what they’re gonna do? They’re gonna…take it 
ooooooff!”

            The music began and I became less and less 
inhibited rubbing up against Gene and watching Bruce 
and Eric go crazy as Liz and Lorelei gave them lap 
dances. “What do you think of our girls?” Paul egged 
the crowd on. “You know there’s only one thing I can 
think of when I see beautiful girls like these.  I 
wanna see a little more.  Do ya wanna see a little 
more?” The crowd cheered for us.  I could see Natalie 
straddling the stage near Paul’s face. “There’s just 
one thing here that’s been bugging the hell out of me, 
and honey, I hope you DO forgive me for this, but some 
of this dress has to go.”  A roadie handed Paul a pair 
of scissors and he cut every strap on Natalie’s 
dress.  The same went for the rest of us.  Gene pulled 
down my mesh skirt, Ace untied Shandi’s dress and let 
it fall around her waist, and Peter untied Kitty’s 
leather top.  Liz and Lorelei simply removed their 
tops.  I don’t know if they wowed the crowd or Bruce 
and Eric more.

            “Alright, Detroit! Are you ready to rock 
and roll all night? Let’s keep these girls up here, 
whadda you say, guys? One, two, three, four!” And 
BANG! All this confetti covered us as we danced to the 
last song. “We love you! Goodnight!”

            We picked up our clothing and headed 
backstage.  I put on my skirt before Gene and I 
entered the room where Sophie and Nicholas were. 
“How’d you like the show?” Gene asked with open arms.

            “Daddy, you put blood on Mommy!” Sophie 
pointed to me, and we just burst out laughing.

            “That’s what you get, a rave review from 
the kids!” I winked at him.

            “C’mon.  Let’s go outside and take some 
pictures,” Gene escorted us to the camera.  I put one 
arm around Gene and the other around Nicholas.  Gene 
held up Sophie on his shoulder as cameras snapped 
pictures of us.  I thought to myself how good it was 
to be part of a family again.  Then Gene stuck his 
tongue in my mouth and gave me a passionate kiss.  
Then I thought, it’s not just good, it’s fucking 
Fantastic.


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